Use "covered work", the defined term from AGPLv3 where possible.
AGPLv3 defines the term "covered work" already, which becomes the core phrase of strong copyleft throughout the existing License. Using this term allows for various simplifications to the permission statement. Furthermore, there is no reason that the licensor can (or really, should try to) grant or copyright permissions for works that aren't covered works. Pam Chestek originally gave me this idea by making her change to §2¶2, pointing out that "works" was problematic there. Finally, the use of the word "file" and "files" was already problematic. Most of the CSS/Javascript/HTML might not be in "files" of its own -- it may for example be inside print statements strewn throughout the covered work. Referring to them as "files" gave the wrong impression to start, something Eric Schultz had raised earlier in drafting.
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The "Output Licenses" are, for works written in HTML, the Creative Commons
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Public Domain Dedication 1.0 Universal or any later version as published by
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Creative Commons, Inc. ("CC0"), and, for works written in CSS and Javascript,
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the GNU Lesser General Public License Version 3 or any later version of that
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license as published by the Free Software Foundation,
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You have the following additional permission: the Output is licensed to you
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No additional permission is granted to any works that are not HTML,
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